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they know

they know me
like i didn't know them
they see things
that i didn't show them

they see
they love
they know
me
and i fight,
and scream and run!
until it all
finally
comes undone
i know it when it's over
because...

when i run
there's no one behind me
anymore
when i run
i go for miles unlike before

when i run
i see my reflection
falling
falling out of touch
with me..

i moved without moving
i cried without tears
we ended in words
but i never heard....

good bye
hello to fears
hello my dears

they know me
like i didn't know them
they see things
that i didn't show them

they see
they love
they know
me

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  • Great Pen
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    Love Always Erica xx

  • KaleidoscopicRage
    October 11, 2008

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    Something I can relate to here. Sometimes though I feel like people don't know me as much as I try to show them-and then there are always the constant questions of if people really do love you. Sometimes when get depressed, I run away and hide. It's a beautiful comfort place for me sometimes.

    when i run
    i see my reflection
    falling
    falling out of touch
    with me..

    I feel like this all the fucking time! Someday, I hope I can reach out and grab a hold of myself and be happy with the person I'm embracing.

    Wonderful, write.


  • M0ofi3
    October 11, 2008

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    My Fears Know Me, Also...

    ...at least that's how I read this. I relate, li'l sister.

    I just wish I don't know them as well. It also seems they have me at a disadvantage.

    A very real and provocative write. Should I expect any less?

    Nah!