Chatter away the fluorescent day
over valleys luscious in fruity
wisdom gates the hall to knowing
through tugs and pulls darned
into subtle experience's, garden
daisies push up of chilled homes
nurtured from raped thinking
glamor plucked by mans hand
hobbling in ruby essence, taunted
waiting daisies in love, peace,
comfort lost inside hues of dark
upward in the clouds, spirited
darned in cobwebs widowed life
harms way ate the picket fence
changed pure white to black cash
over mountains sinking to oceans bay
laugh the words stabbing friendship
to anti-trust in casual assault
tear at happiness till doves talk
help the poor in cold vespers
change the world to new found
compassion, glimmering
A contest entry
- Mind Manipulation - The Truly Most Dangerous Game by Shikamaru-Nara.
450 points, ended October 16, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm thinking that your aiming for confusion, (lol). Regardless, I love it. It flows well, and gives great imagery.
Love the vocabulary usage as well.
Good luck!
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