Desire is the soul of one who is not
not family..not really...
but so desires to be.
Alone by nature and circumstance
not really...not ever...
afraid to dance
Trust is so rare a commodity
for family...not really..
it is all it can be
So take me as almost kin
not really...but always
as it should have been.
Author notes
Foster Brother
A contest entry
- I Am So Lonely... I Need A Family by Angels Whispers.
900 points, ended November 5, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - WitchyCatWoman's Ap Family by WitchyCatWoman.
1000 points, ended September 7, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Foster brother you shall be!
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Hello Sweetheart,I send to you much love, and hope this message greets you with a happy heart.
Upon reading your poem, it brought tears to my eyes,for your words were so soft and tender,and so very loving.
I tried to pin point a line or stanza on your write that stood out the most to me, like tugging at my heart, but I simply could not do it, because the whole poem was just so beautiful.
Every word touched my heart deeply. Not even my real life husband has spoken such beautiful words to me.
If I could reach through this monitor,I would tenderly hug you and give back to you, what you have given to me, and that is love and caring of another human being.
Sweet heart your poem was written extremely well,
and I have so much love to give, and would dearly love to share this with you.
So with arms opened wide, it would make my heart so very happy for you to join my family.
I'm glad to have you as my 'Foster Brother'.
With deep appreciation I thank you for wanting to become a member of my family, and also for noticing my contest and taking the time to enter it.
I send to you much love and happiness and look forward to getting to know you more deeply than what I already do!
Take care my precious brother, I look forward to many days of love shared with you. and I will always be here for you, supporting you in your work, as well as your life here ,and outside in the real world!
Your loving 'Foster Sister',
Angel-Anne
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How sweet. Such a gentle poem.
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this is a wonderful way to ask to be a foster brother.
You did an outstanding job with this.
Riftkin
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This was really good and the write went with the prompt so well! Good Job Hon
Alone by nature and circumstance
not really...not ever...
afraid to dance
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