Desires rise to the heavens...
Among the stars
or
Fall to earth and are lost
Like fallling stars that loose their life.
What kind of desires do you possess?
Some never become more than wishes.
True desirs however,
Will ignite fires of passions
And will reach upward
Like ballons which when filled with helium
Soar high into the sky.
So be like the ballons
And let your desires become your road
Of building a better Life.
So that one day...
You will carve a legacy
Of great footprints
That others will wish to follow.
dragonheart1
Author notes
Ah..desires are like the
colored baloons always
flying up..but...Unknown.
A contest entry
- desires... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 24, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yes..this is the process of the life and you have depicted the defination of the desires in a universal way..bringing an intriuging flavour to the prompt..I am impressed here my friend..well done...
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Enjoyable
Colorful as a picture..very good write




