"Stop calling me!"
I scream with a murderous rage.
"You chant my name,
you tell me it will be OK.
My Father warned me of you,
I hate you!
I despise you!
You separate me from Him!
You harden my heart!
I will dance with you no more!
You claim to be a friend,
but I'm sorry,
Friends aren't deceiving!
They don't lie!
They don't laugh at you
as you fall lower and lower!
They don't hit you when your down!
I'm running away from you now,
I cant wait till your beat to the ground!
I cant wait to see you thrown in Hell!
Bound forever with no way up.
I want so much to scream curses your way!
And Lord please forgive me,
I wont give the little nothing that joy.
But Lord, together, we'll wreck his world.
I know you don't need me Father,
but thank you for allowing me to be here.
Allowing me to watch his face as he sees me fall into your arms.
He trembles when he even hears your name Lord,
thank you for your mighty protection,
your mighty love,
your mighty mercy that covers all sin!
Satan, your done for,
in His name,
Be gone!
Author notes
First off, I really am ticked at Satan, as well as myself for listening to him lately. But because Im a child of God, there's no way he'll win the war. The Bible says that Satan trembles at our Fathers name, and he will be banished in Hell for all that hes done. His deceiving and trickery, that causes so many to fall, wont bother us anymore. And as we fall into our Saviors arms, I cant imagine what Satan would feel. He'll probably have such amazing anger, and frustration, when God finally comes back to take all of us home. He will watch in despair, as our God stands bright and shining, finally receiving all the glory that Hes always deserved.
On a side note,
I was just releasing,
so the rhythm and flow,
probably not so good.
Nichole, I tried my best
on fixing all the grammar mistakes, lol
so I hope it was good. Feel free to
take your butcher knife to it :-P
A contest entry
- Give me your Rage! by Bean Sidhe.
700 points, ended October 21, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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How did you know I would butcher it? Well, here I go , though I'm glad to say you did a rather nice job on grammar in this write^^
I cant wait till your beat to the ground!
I cant wait to see you thrown in Hell!
Don't forget your apostrophes
cant=can't
Really, that's about it. I'll bet he's shaking in his...well, whatever he wears on his feet. Great write! -
Nicely done & best of luck in the contest!
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I know, the guy just doesn't know he's buried. Only thing I see is the lack of apostrophes in possesives and combo words (i.e. Im = I'm). Otherwise a very blessed, angry write that probably scared him all over again!
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BEGONE SATAN ...SAVE YOU JESUS =]
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