Freedom is my drug.
My peers don't see,
we need our liberty.
Taking our lifes for granted,
for little things you ranted.
Can you really see love?
Be a rebel to chaos.
Live your life for you,
not for love that make us blue.
Dealing with a lot of pain,
to feel like you can obtain.
Can you really see love?
Love is burning.
A passion or a desire,
it takes years to acquire.
It can make or break your heart,
the two never want to be apart.
Can you really see love?
Author notes
Prompt: Hammerfall - Hearts on Fire
A contest entry
- Many Few Random Prompt Options Contest by No longer in use.
600 points, ended October 23, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? All criticism is welcome
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very good
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woahh!! this is great!! i love it and it just flows amazingly
keep up all your good work hun! x -
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hehe thanks i really tried with this poem
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holy crap
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hehe thanks
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This is an awesome write. Very very good. I really like this you did an amazing job on the prompt. Wonderful. Love it. Ses Magnifique. That's french for "OMGosh!!! IT'S THE MOST FANTASTIC THING I'VE EVER READ!" or..."It's Magnificent" But whatever the meaning it's what I mean.
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thanks.. what can I say an amazing prompt brought on an amazing write hehe
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