Friends like you Anne...
Are the Angels of LIfe.
They make life much easier to face
but
Sometimes we still feel chained
Because we can't let go to the past.
so
I request that you include me
In your family as a hubby or lover
for
I guess I am lonely too
I need to feel your touch
Of sensual caring which my fiancee lacks.
For she is not as loving as I
But her heart...
Like yours is pure gold!
I don't like to beg for anything
but
I could help ease your pains.
As I have a kind heart too
One that is full of Magic...
Waitng to be shared
Just for the asking.
So Angel Anne...
Let me know where I stand.
but
Even if I am not chosen
To be in your AP family...
I will still be your friend.
By the way,
I love your AP name
but
Still think you should be called...
Angel of Wispers
for
Your kind words echo thru the wind
Like echoes of love.
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- I Am So Lonely... I Need A Family by Angels Whispers.
900 points, ended November 5, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Husband you shall be!
Much love to you my dear sweet dragon man.
I sit here reading your words of love and devotion, tears are welling up within my eyes and soon will spill over, for your words have touched my soul so deeply.
I have never had such a beautiful dedication written for me before. Not even my real life husband has spoken such beautiful words to me.
If I could reach through this monitor,I would tenderly hug you and give back to you, what you have given to me, and that is love and caring of another human being.
Your heart speaks of love, and I 'see' and 'feel' this when I read your work.
I feel your lonliness when you say that your partner is not affectionate, I know how that feels, it leaves one feeling so empty.
I am honoured that you have opened up your heart to me, sharing your private thoughts about your real life relationship.
This is what I was hoping all entries would do for me, as I have opened up my very soul and have let you all have a look inside my life.
Sweet heart your poem was written extremely well.
You have told me why you wish to be part of my family, you also have told me what you can bring into the relationship and why.
I have so much love to give, and would dearly love to share this with you.
You will feel the tenderness of my touch through our words of caring for each other, for we both have hearts of tenderness and so much love to share.
With arms opened wide, it would make my heart so very happy for you to join my family.
I'm glad to have you as my 'HUSBAND'
With deep appreciation I thank you for wanting to become a member of my family, and also for noticing my contest and taking the time to enter it.
I send to you much love and happiness and look forward to getting to know you more deeply than what I already do!
Take care my precious husband, I look forward to many days of love shared with you, and I will always be....
"Your Angel of Whispers
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speechless
well that was byond amazing.....a winner i'm sure....great poem and sentements.....
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A very nice write. Love the dragon picture!
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