Parisian afternoon delight
Riverside cafe dalliance.
Azure sky, injected sunlight
Parisian afternoon delight
A New love affair far from trite
Embracing summertime brilliance
Parisian afternoon delight
Riverside cafe dalliance.
Author notes
First Attempt at a Triolet
photo prompt from photobucket.com
In a list
A contest entry
- Triolet PIF by carole21.
750 points, ended October 15, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Truly Romantic!!
Ahh, love is in the air; summertime, cafe' dining, all the trappings for romance make this poem a special afternoon delight!! Thank you for sharing, and for teaching me the art of the "Triolet" - Congrats on the emerald cup!! Peace, Cyn 
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Good write.. I've never done a triolet. (Didn't know what they were). hehe
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Very nicely summed up... and you may well have kept to the form far better than I have. My first too!
Good luck to you, very well done.
Sol
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Nice Coment. Thank you for reading. Take care. Sandy
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It seems
that this competition is one of 'firsts'. I enjoyed the read. Choice of wording describes the scene well. Best for you in the contest. Frans
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Superb
Very well written, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
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Great Comment!!!!!!!!
Good Morning Clovis.
Nice to have your old name back. Thank you for this lovely and encouraging comment. I always appreciate your thoughts. Hugs and Smiles.
Take care,
Sandy
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You are quite welcome. Hope you have a good day. I shall, and you also.
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well done .. thanks for the contest entry
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Thank you for the nice comment. Take care. Sandy
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