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Your Show

You put on a show
A smile
To hide your breaking heart
And no one notices
That your smile looks
Forced
Pained
And fades away to nothing

You put on a show
A laugh
To hide your fear inside
And no one notices
That your laugh sounds
Forced
Pained
And fades away into misery

You put on a show
A joke
To hide your insecurities,
And no one notices
That your joke is
Forced
Pained
And fades away into silence

Behind your show
Tears
To let out your emotions
And no one will ever notices
How you are
Forced
Pained
Until you fade away completely

Author notes

For Daniel.
Because I'm the only one who can see through his show.
And I know it's hard.
But I'm always here.

I think it's too repetative

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  • Super-man
    October 13, 2008

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    WOW

    Awesome. Really

     

     Under your skin, your blood is thick and motionless.  I know this show, its painstaking and mind numbing.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 11, 2008

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    ohmygosh!

    this is such a wowzer. i love the way you put your emotions into words here... and yeaa, it's a lil repetetive, but hey, that just makes it impactful. great write, wonderful descriptions! simple, and very strong. write on!


  • Shimano
    October 11, 2008

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    Simple and effective

    Your emotion is simply penned in this lovely piece.Your pen just flowed into creating a simple and effective poem.I can relate to the emotion painted in this piece