Sentimental, little romantic
hidden behind my fits of rage.
You seek for more attention
than an animal at a shelter.
Why do you slip away silently...
never causing a wake in waters?
Trickling away in the still of night,
confessing lusts of passions from
these lips turned so blue.
Tomorrow is just another goodbye-
another lover left behind.
...to be continued
what emotions do you feel when you read this
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If anyone is seeking attention, its you.
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and so on and so on..
maybe the right one just hasn't come around yet
nice piece, enjoyed it
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Love; such an overwhelming sense - poison to some while anecdote for others... I see a pain which lingers still, and renders a heart unsure, unsteady - and scared to open again, in fear of what could come. Some wish so much to simply know how to love again once that bond had been severed. I know it all to well... because to open up to being possibly hurt again is the very last thing you want to feel.
This hit home lol. I will hush now. Great write!
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Wow this is a great start so far. I like the direction you took it in and im left wondering how you will finish it :] Hope u get the chance
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i like where you were foing with this
honestly
i think this is amazing
a nice way to look at soemthing
and the last lines really get you..
i love when that happens
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It makes me feel sad. I know someone like this, and I've tried to love him. But he simply doesn't know how to receive it. Nice work.
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That does sound sad. Sometimes it is just a matter of time in a person's life. It takes patience to wait for the wounded.
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