Desires come and desires go
They constantly change over time
One day it may be for a food
Or a craving that's oh sublime
There are many kinds of desire
We express them every day
It may be to see a loved one
Who has moved so far away
Our desires are like the baloons
Flying up in a colored array
Sometimes they're filled with hot air
And not a desire that will stay
But my very favorite desire
Is to spend my life with you
For you are my heartbeat my love
I know you love me true
A contest entry
- desires... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 24, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah..so simple yet so much beautiful work by the beautiful penning of the poet..I love it..you have sketched the immages of the truth in so much plain and catchy description..well done....
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Thank you PrabhuDayal for your kind comment on my poem. Thanks for holding this contest and congratulations to the winners.
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WELL worded with deep thoughts
YOU STRESSED THE NEED FOR A DESIRELESS LIFE
WELL worded with deep thoughts surging in
"Our desires are like the baloons
Flying up in a colored array
Sometimes they're filled with hot air
And not a desire that will stay"
Katie! you spun the idea well -
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Thank you Purush for reading my poem and for your comments. They are appreciated. Katie
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