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Open Letter (InProgress)

It's as though it's all been said
That I have nothing new to offer
Nothing but one simple question
Tell me where it hurts
Tell me what to do
And I'll fix you
You fear they don't like you
Well I do so burn them all
I know you're feeling let down
Abandoned by the highway side
And maybe this was my fault
I was happy
But I didn't know how to feel it
So tell me where it hurts
And I'll find a way to fix it

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I think I give up on this one

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  • panic-tiger-is-here
    November 3, 2008
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    Another really good poem. I really like your work so far