Every now and then I get tired from listening to the sounds of my tears.
Holding you is the safest place I'd want to be,
Embracing your touch, my angel... sends away my worries and fears.
Your love diminishes this distance between us.
Laughter of our memories together feed me with strength and grace,
To wake up everyday with the thought of you, I could almost touch your face.
Such blessings from heaven leave me humble and thankful.
For having you in my life Chris;
With baby Joe in the future... our lives will be complete- a handful!
Butterfly kiss's dance and kindly peck my cheeks.
Cloudless skies with endless winds brushing against my skin,
I feel your presence; the intimacy in the air cuddles me as it speaks.
Unconditional love, bathed in passion and honey wine.
You unleash the beast within me,
Cater to my needs, the feelings you provoke in me in words can't be defined.
We are yesterday's reminiscences, today's youth and tomorrow's hope.
Our fate entwined as one, written in the stars above,
You're my better half, my sanctuary of love.
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt: Love by IrishGypsyRose.
600 points, ended October 11, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Distance: What does it mean? by Ignis Corpus.
450 points, ended November 4, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Good Pre Writes With No Trophies by lindaburns.
2100 points, ended November 11, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Before I make a final comment on your poem, could I get you to go back and put a period at the end of each thought? Please? For example, the first stanza has 4 complete thoughts and only one period. The contest end in a matter of hours.
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Your poem sounds like a real tribute to one who is truly loved. How blessed to have such a one. Emotional and heartfelt. Good work.
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Done !!! =)
Glad you pointed this out!
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This is so whimsical and genuine! Truly a lovely sentiment. You captured what it is like to feel entwined with loves bliss so gracefully! Wonderfully penned Yotta! It sounds like you are lucky in love
Kelly
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Awww th is is so sweet and beautiful. I adore this. It flows so well. So elegantly. I can see it all in my head and I smell a soft breeze. It's stunning really. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
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Beautiful
I love the imagery and the flow and even though the names are different, the feelings are one and the same. Nothing cliche` about this piece dear. Great write and best of wishes in my contest. Yours in poetry, gypsy
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