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The Real Disney

If I love you
I’d let you go
But this a selfish love
One you cannot know.
One were the beast just stalks the beauty
And is pained every time
the beauty goes to the prince
and the wedding bells chime.
And at the wedding
the beast hides its tears
as it wishes you luck and life
then disappears.

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i like the allusion of the beauty and the beast, you? again, im pissed, so sorry if its not the best, maybe ill write a better poem in detention, sorry, i love saying i have detention

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    Oh, wow.

    Loving the idea of the beast disappearing.
    Actually gave me goosebumps.
    Great ending here!!


  • libithina
    October 14, 2008

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    Oh Stehanie hope that detention didn't last long but I bet you write some great poems like the one above, so proud of you my dearest daughter x x Once again a very mature insight, yes I loved the Beauty and the Beast s

  • She Stole My Voice
    October 11, 2008
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    "If I love you
    I’d let you go
    But this a selfish love"

    I believe all love is selfish, even if we don't realize it. but that's just me
    Which Beauty and the Beast?
    The original or the Disney one?
    haha.
    Thank you for writing and sharing ♥


    -rainbow.


    • Hidden
      October 19, 2008
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      disney, thats y its called the real disney. thanks for reading