Hair as BLACK as night,
Such a pretty sight.
Skin a coffee BROWN,
Hardly ever makes a sound;
The SILVER blade, that is
across already bruised skin.
Tears cloud the WHITE of my eyes-
Focusing on the vein that I slice
Wrist splits; revealing a river of RED,
Leaking swiflty...but I'm not scared..
I just begin to feel a little BLUE
My Daddy just fucked me and all he could say was
I LOVE YOU......
A contest entry
- My first contest, please help !!! Allowing PW,s by justgot2loveme.
2200 points, ended October 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow this really touched my heart,
so sad to know that things like this
really happens. You have done an
excellent job on expressing
this piece.
Good luck in the contest.
Justgot2loveme
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Thanks so much for reading...
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An riveting piece of emotion you have expressed here. Sadly too many can relate to all that is in your heart.
My best to you in this contest!
Linda
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I agree...this should really stop happening....Thanks for ur comment
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Damn..
Tears can't stop the pain you're in..
but rest assured, he will suffer this sin.
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Thanks for the support..
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Wow, terribly sad!
Something that no one should
ever have to go through.
Wonderful work with this piece.
Jeremy0826 -
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Thanks so much....yeah, sux
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