Once there was a boy
His name was called Troy
He always had wished to fly
Up,up,up into the sky
He went across a shop one day
Which said : fly up and away!
He took out all his money
And he smiled a smile which made him look funny
It was affordable
He asked took his money out
His mother asked 'why are you running about?'
He stopped to shout
I'm going to buy wings
He put on the wings
And he could really fly!
Up into the sky!
But now it's too late
He can't fly back to the ground
He frowned and frowned
BUt he couldn't go back down
A contest entry
- My first contest, please help !!! Allowing PW,s by justgot2loveme.
2200 points, ended October 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
OKay?
Comments
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oh this is really cute. well written and a sweet little story. I wonder how he ever managed to get down again.
Wouldn't it be great to have wings and really be able to fly.
Well done
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clever indeed, a very great piece of poetry.
I very much enjoyed this piece.
justgot2loveme
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lol He couldn't go back down, I guess the wings didn't come with directions
A clever and creative piece you have entered!!
All my best to you in the contest!
Linda
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