silent killer
in the road
watching gleefully
as he shows
no remorse for the wicked
everybody in this town is nearly dead
sinfully wanting
nobody taunting
always been bothered
you've let loose the demon
in me
and if you looked into my eyes
would you see
harmony or tragedy
calm before the storm
storm before the calm
if you want anything
you can have it
just don't take anything
from me
and if you want to get high
you can get it off for free
murdering in cold blood
never felt this good
and if i could
well then i would
gladly change my ways
but once i did it
i couldn't go back
i killed my mother
i killed her lover
and even killed my younger brother
just cause i wanted to know what it felt like
so i roam the world
looking for young boys and girls
haunt them in their dreams
no pleasent thoughts tonight
all covered in dark
no light
they didn't find me
they kept looking
silent killer stalks lonely town
i came without a sound
watching, waiting, and observing
pick my victims fresh
wait until they forget
who i am
the sound of cries
nobody can tell me lies
it's all been said and done before
i pick at everything
my mind is slowly warping
and if i could take it all back
i wouldn't
because the lessons you learn in life are hard
my pain is my joy
my sadness is their toy
they keep messing around with me
until i finally start breaking apart...
what do you feel when you read this?
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Wow....This reminds me so much of me.Great write!!!! Awesome flow!!
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o.o
well dont come to my town or you'll have to deal wih me k?
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69 lines
69 lol.
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Brilliant, Enthralling, capturing! everything good to say! Great job with the imagery and flow and the wording was just so..ahh I loved it!
absolutely marvelous!
Keep it up for sure!
Love Always,
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dang Son! You about scare the crap outta me! *shifteyes* You remind me of all those TV Killers Like Freddy and jason, The Texas Chain Saw dude, ect. But great job in the flow and rhyme! Keep up the good work! *hug
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wow
wow another good one
i really like it
it keeps you interested not a dull line here
you made your point
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wow
Very well done, Jack. This write is dark, and full of great detail. This brings out the dark side in all of us. Spilling blood, just out of curiosity, and the deep hurt that life can cause. A great write! Good job, Hubby!
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It's deep and kinda creepy with the way things are now. There really are tons of yungstas out there killin fam... I like dark writes and this one was full of imagination and emotions! WEll penned bro!
Peace and Love
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