Roaming halls of indignation
cares elude daily dreams.
Forever seems fragrance filled
as silent fear settles calmly.
Prisoner to past redemption
wallowing self afflictions wound.
Left alone in still moments
as time rests within shallow frames.
Searching freedoms bridge
between plains so forgotten.
Hidden realms capture my soul
holding me captive through out eternity.
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie Pic Prompt by Carolina Moon.
450 points, ended October 11, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Heavy Hearted
Comments
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Sure is inscribed with hues that paint a portrait ever so blue, and how well you pen your inner most thoughts. Wonderfully penned from within, and all the best with this contest, and in your sweet soul.
Peace
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Wonderful imagery and a great take on the pic. Great read! Thank you for your entry.
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This too is a good take on the prompt. It flowed very well, and it haunts the reader even as you comment. Good luck.
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