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Sexual suprise of pleasure

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Beads to tease...
Will they exite a woman
As much as a feather?
Or gentle massaging hands?
Only a woman will know
for
What excites one
Will not excite another.
But the decor of the red beads
Accentuates her beautiful breasts
and
Makes her nipples seem more erect.
So roll the beads
Gently across her breasts
And watch her moan with pleasure
As she wiggles and begs for more.
Just the tease would excite me
Would it excite you too?
One many not know for sure
Till he tries it ont on his lover.
Just tell her
I have a suprise for you
And then say
Let me give you pleasure...
But only by teasing you with beads.

dragoheart1

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  • nevadapoet
    October 23, 2008
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    nicely done...a perfect entry for this contest. Nice form and imagery. Thanks for entering.


  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 10, 2008
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    Not bad! Not bad at all! Tastefully written. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


    • Dragonheart1 gold member
      October 10, 2008
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      my poem

      Thanks for your comment on my poem sexaul suprise of pleasure....


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    minor grammatical and spelling errors, but overall a very sensual piece. Thank you for sharing it with me.

    Good luck in the contest

    Passionspromise


  • the ripple
    October 10, 2008
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    I thought that this was entertaining

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