When the rain falls...
those drops are my tears falling from heaven
crying that we had to part ways.
It is beautiful up here.
I can't wait for you to arrive.
Enjoy your life on earth while you have it.
For you don't know how long it will last.
I shall see you when it's your time to pass.
Until then...the rain will continue to fall...
each drop, a remembrance of the one who loves you most.
Author notes
Prompt #1 "When rain falls"
A contest entry
- Line Prompt by crivanea.
300 points, ended October 28, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I want readers to give me honest feedback and any suggestions you may have.
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hah!!!..good job!..usually it is the earth looking up to the sky..but in this poem..the viewpoint changes..nice job!!..i like the change in scenery ..thnx for entering
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I appreciate you commenting on my poem. Yes, I decided to take a different viewpoint and switch it around and do it like it's the one from heaven looking down. I'm glad u liked it and again, thanks for commenting
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