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When I look at you

Looking you steadily in the eye, with a straight expression I can lie to your face, because, in your eyes, I see the truth in your expression, confessions. Your feel the need to extend the truth, but in your heart you feel its wrong, cheating and needing, wanting to make that change

You tell me not to lie, but as the sound of your voice comes out of your mouth, I can already tell your lying to yourself, you have deceived yourself. You say that you love me, now why can't you tell me, why you put on this act, this is no game. Reality my friend, can be untamed.

You wondered why, I said good bye, I told you why, your a lying, deceiving, cheating, misleading, mistreating woman I have ever known.

Never able to stay loyal, its no surprise why, you cheated and cheated and lost the one who would have given the world, to change your ways, to help you change. So you could be happy for the rest of your days.

Hope everything is fine, its been 10 years since that time. Hoping of your dreams coming true, love and live life, for the rest of your time. Good bye, my love. for the rest of time.

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  • ourgirlFriday
    October 10, 2008

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    Well,

    Replace 'woman' in 3rd to the last stanza with 'man' and that's how my last relationship panned out. Love the ending; some people just don't know what they got 'til it's gone.