It may very well be that we shall be
all together,
always and forever; however,
it remains altogether illusive
that such an instance as this
shall be in the arrays of all ways.
And such an allusion as this,
while seemingly to the proper allegory,
is but a mere illusion of faith;
and alludes seemingly less to the delusions of grandeur
and more to the illusions of saints.
Thusly: I pray that the prey of his presence are not
relied on pride
for they too must assuredly be pried
from the principal scene
to be seen by the ‘principal’;
at least in principle.
For when this comes to pass,
when Hitler’s claim to fame reveals itself
as not his:
but simply their eugenic practice –
we become rail-roaded toward destruction:
gas chambers and cellular combustion.
But it is they who will pay it dearest
when the darkest intentions ‘come clearest.
In a list
All I can say is that I hope you like it...
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DEMOCRACY A BIG SLAP TO ALL THOSE WHO HOPES BETTER THINGS IN THE FUTURE
I WOULD LOVE TO GIVE YOU A REFERENCE TO READ
KHILAFA SYSTEM IN ISLAM
AND HISTORY OF KHILAFA
PLZ READ YOU WILL GET ALOTTTT IN IT
THANKS FOR ENTERING
well, Im great fan of hitler
Since it was 12
well disciplined and man of Honor
Salute to him Always
WONDERFUL STOCK!
THANKS
YOU SCORED 71 IN MY CONTEST OUT OF 100
BY
THE POET OF HEARTS AND BEAUTIFUL WORDS
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When my children were young, I introduced them to the "one world order" theory. They have since watched the very information that I shared transpire.
This is what I have come to understand from years of research and a close watch;
"Their first and immediate aim is to get the possession of riches, power, and influence, without industry; and, to accomplish this, they want to abolish Christianity; and then dissolute manners and universal profligacy will procure them the adherents of all the wicked, and enable them to overturn all the civil governments of Europe; after which they will think of farther conquests, and extend their operations to the other quarters of the globe, till they have reduced mankind to the state of one indistinguishable chaotic mass."
http://www.masonicinfo.com/illuminati.htm
Look at the most pressing news we have this day; The government is unwilling to help the auto industry but did not bat an eye to give billions to rich tycoon on wall street. ~Sigh
I feel every word written here my friend and do miss the readiness of your intelligent muse.
Blessings & Love ♥
Renee
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Made me
but I loved it 
Your writing is always deeper than the average you find on AP. Love the word play in here.
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what a way to come back writing after being gone for awhile. i agree with the use of homophones... i liked that, and i dont know why exactly, but this reminded me a bit of writing by dr. seuss, except on a darker, much more mature level... (so dont take that as a dis... it's actually a compliment)and remember, i already said i dont really know why, so dont ask me why.
i guess it is how i read it... the flow, even without rhyme.
as i read this, i felt it was a betrayal on people in general... on how we feel compelled, on one way or another to see things through the eyes of one who is supposed to lead us to freedom, but ultimately leads to destruction... and when do we find this betrayal out??? hopefully not when it is too late.
that is just my insight on it, and if it isn't close, then at least i got a personal interpretation out of it.
OH... ya.. i think i know why it seems doctor seuss-ish... it's what metaphorist thought as over kill... it is THAT over doing it, that pulls the attention in... well, i dont think i'm doing a good job explaining that since i'm tired, so i'll stop before i appear even more foolish
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Firstly, I love the use of homophones. Very clever indeed. I think you mentioned you were gonna do that months ago when I work one for a contest.
Anyway, your pieces are always beyond my intelligence level especially at this time of the day (and week). But I did get something out of this especially the ending stanza.
The only negative I found (because I try to mess with perfection) is the allusion/illusion/illusive/alludes word-plays in the beginning. I like having allusion and illusion but adding the adjective and verb form is just overkill. Just trying to be objective
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And if I said 'overkill' was why I used it: what then?
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Don't pay any attention to me. What do I know?
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It would seem a very great deal
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now tell us what it's really about. i'd really like to know
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The degradation of America, and of the world - but most importantly the illuminati's plans and what that means for us; and them obviously.
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intelligent
..Charmingly so. A well crafted deep and thoughtful with a serious whimsy that I trully admire.
Who ever put meaning into words so fittingly?
I applaud you for reaching great broad political beginnings and ends.
"For when this comes to pass,
when Hitler’s claim to fame reveals itself
as not his:
but simply their eugenic
practice –"
- Oh so clear !
A most worthy write. ..and what a sharp mind you must possess.
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First, let me compliment your word-ply. It teases the tongue fancifully, truly! The logic, and canny ability you possess to spin a message this cleverly is one for the books dear friend.
"we become rail-roaded toward destruction:
gas chambers and cellular combustion.
But it is they who will pay it dearest
when the darkest intentions ‘come clearest."
There is more than meets the eye in that passage poet.
"the truth stomped under foot will still rise"
BRAVO!
Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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