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Honey Pot

Laying naked upon my bed
legs open widely spread
fingers dipping in my honey pot
as thoughts of you make me wet and hot.

Clit between my finger and thumb
trying hard not to cum
I want this moment to last
trying not to move too fast.

I imagine you are here
your view is very clear
insert my vibrating toy
that always brings me you.

Pretenting it's your cock
perfect length and hard as a rock
sliding effortlessly in and out
making my wet pussy lips pout.

The dildo shines in the light
from my wetness as I grip it tight
plunging it hard and deep
down to my ass my juices seep.

Arching my back at the pleasure of sin
dropplets of sweat appear on my skin
working it hard, vibrating my clit
so wet it slips out of my slit.

I rush to put it back in place
as the look of ecstasy crosses my face
as my sweet honey flows
and my face plainly glows.

I lay there not able to move
so tell me now, do you approve?
Want a taste from my honey pot
do you yes or do you not?







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  • T-Dizzle Mcnizzle
    March 8, 2009
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    Yes please!!!! Damn that is sooooo hot!!!!!Good job!


  • firion
    January 2, 2009
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    yes plz lol great write and great background loved it


  • CRi2-B3HiND-4-SMiL3
    October 26, 2008
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    i love this!!! nd ur background too! you have a way with words!

  • azureize
    October 15, 2008
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    MOVING....!!

    awakening, inspiring, stiffening...just plain damn GOOD! MORE, please!!


  • scenescene
    October 14, 2008
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    this is so raw


  • MyLadysKnight
    October 14, 2008

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    I'll bet licking your honey pot would be very sweet and delicious. Now I'm horny, can I have a lick? Great poem.


  • Blueskywonder
    October 11, 2008
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    Ooh... such a detailed and vivid piece of poetry, which leaves one kinda hungry


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    GULP!!

    UHM UHM UHM...DA DA DA DA DA.........DAMN!!! HOLY KEEBOOTEL!! L.O.L. BLAZING HOTT! Great 'work'!


  • carl dunford
    October 10, 2008
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    I do approve, ooh yes!
    What a poem hot!! hot!!
    Carl x


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    Thats what I'm talking about Hot and nasty something to make my na na wet!!!!!

  • mcfreeman
    October 10, 2008
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    Writing like this is the best

    Honey on everything!

  • vampedvixen
    October 10, 2008

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    Very hot!

    This makes me want to lie on my bed, put my feet up and relax with my toys. You have a gift for giving voice to the most base of human instincts and desires. I really like the simplistic four line stanzas, they're easy to read and give a certain quickness to the poem. I like the title, "Honey Pot".. I don't think I've ever heard it refer to as such, but it certainly does fit the imagery. And the need for the other person to be there, but not going into emo angst is really nice. Good read!

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