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Vinyl Masks

Hold my hand
Dry away turmoil
Tears of blood

Let your tender words be spoken
Dreams be free
Enlighten me

Feel free to rip my soul
Cry into the open wounds
A salt-water sting of healing
To claim all sanity

Scream into the darkness
For God to save us all
The blood-stained eyes of angels
  Dying

Staring past that mask we wear
Dreaming to rip the vinyl from skin
Stuck on the petty ethos
Of our human faces
  Crying
On our saving graces
  Dying

Blood red tears on glowing yellow face
The radio-active wastes
Devouring us all

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  • narcissist
    October 10, 2008

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    Stuck on the petty ethos
    Of our human faces
    Crying

    i love this poem, it's really well written and your form is interesting too. great write : )


    • Zixaphir
      October 11, 2008
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      Well, thanks a bunch. ^^
      I wrote it while I should have been paying attention to my Public Speaking class. O.o