All Hallows’ Eve, a special night
when the dead can rise again.
This year I plan to prove it…
at least among my men.
I’ll invite them over, one by one,
and each one I’ll greet
wearing nothing but a smile
and I’ll whisper “Trick or Treat.”
I’ll strip them at the doorway
and leave them standing bare
then like a female spider
I’ll invite them to my lair.
I think back to the past.
I’ve always given more
than I’ve received but not this year.
It’s my time to soar.
I want feel their manliness
deep inside of me
with mouth and hands and hardness
I want release and ecstasy.
I so enjoy “the little death”
when they’re between my legs.
It pleasure I demand,
I’m not the kind that begs!
So this Halloween’s for pleasure
I plan to have my fun.
And in honor of the day
I think I’ll go for thirty-one!
Author notes
So you don't think I'm too jaded, that's 31 O's - not partners (LOL)
Happy Halloween JinSays 
La petite mort, French for "the little death", is a reference to the female sexual orgasm.
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: The Watchtower by Paul John Ballard
No line limit
A contest entry
- Halloween contest for men only (adult) by JinSays.
1500 points, ended November 4, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
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I love it I love it I love it I love it
MOST excellent!
YOU'RE REALLY COOKING FIRE LATELY
right ON!
Woooohooooo..dunno why, but this write makes me extremely happy
. Spider sensations...lol, is that normal?
Probably not, huh?
you silly, I read La Vie Boheme`, I know what La Petit Mort meant...
You done good Ken. Superb storytelling, great flow too, and for a piece that goes such as this, that's pretty tough to do.
You Rock Ken, and Happy Halloween to you too sir
jin
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Does the song "itsy bitsy spider" ring a bell?
So glad you liked it... Thanks for a terrific comment
Ken
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now this is what I call a treat.. omg I read this last night, early this morning several times mind you.. I really couldn't even begin to even comment. that's not a bad thing either.. You've done it again.. This poem is outstanding..
good luck in the contest my lover
kat
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omg, this one's the best halloween poem I've read ever. This make more sence then running around trick or treathing people
Best of luck in the contest!
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Oh my what a treat
to be with such manly meat.
between ones open legs,
and nope .. we never beg.
But to take thirty-one
just as the day begun
would be a bigger feat
if they were all so sweet.
I love your take on this one.
Riftkin
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This is great LOL! I loved it you always write so well and always keep my full attention. Good Luck in the contest
hotchocolate
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