She walks the broken halls knowing deep within herself that its all she has left
Stepping on glass
Screaming in shear agony and sorrow
As she stumbles to the cold hard ground
crushing her own heart
With each dreaded empty step
to terrified to press on
always knowing in her soul
no one will be there
No one will catch her when she takes her last fall
The last punch this cruel heartless life will throw her way
She stumbles all alone
Destiny finally fulfilling itself
Her last and only sign of life
The stingingly cold blood soaking through her clothes from her fresh wounds
Showing her decieving scars
Revealing her hidden truth
She tumbles down
Into her worst fears
Her terrifing haunting nightmares
Being left alone
To face herself
alone
she never really thought about it much
but that one word is worse than death itself
like the seering pain of burning tearing flesh
she decides
she must do it
Kill herself
And finally end the everflowing blood
Flowing from her raw, shreaded wrists
Staining her precious previous life
Leaving her this ragged one
Filled with misery and hate
Sorrow and the endless rain
The endless pain
And finally the endless death
A contest entry
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Comments
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its a little non-discriptive, make it real
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This was a sad, dark write, but very very good. Good Luck.
♥ Kathraina -
I think it is intresting and I like it, but if you want to revise try using more description words. try describing the pain, what it feels like, it makes it more real to a reader.
good luck -
i like it but thats just me so cll me punk some goth most emo but only in depression
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