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Circling Around

(in triolet form)

My thoughts circle round my mind
Never leaving me for long,
Never leaving me behind..
My thoughts circle round my mind
These thoughts are not always kind
Mostly tell me that I'm wrong
My thoughts circle round my mind..
Never leaving me for long!

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  • jadeangyal
    January 28

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    Nice picture for the poem. If you aren't looking at the wolf faces, it almost looks like a spiral or a helix. Great triolet, and great subject. Swirling thoughts, swirling words...Bravo!


  • narcissist
    October 10, 2008
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    oo, i like this form. it's very fun to read and you write very well, i enjoyed this. "These thoughts are not always kind"

    : ) very good.