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Trust

I always do this
I fuck up
I fall for you
and worse yet,
Trust you
I always get hurt
But I keep trusting
Keep hoping
That maybe this time
This guy
Maybe he wont break my heart
like all the rest
Like you

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  • KissMe123
    November 13, 2008

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    this is an awesome poem and i can really agree with this i struggle with love too i can never seem to find a guy who doesnt want to break my heart

    i can totally relate to this poem i really like the last four lines they really tell me a lot about it and i really hope that you find a guy that wont break your heart

    P.S. i hope that not all guys hurt you like this poem says the do, this one really made me feel your emotions i really can feel wat you were tryin to say through it