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anger

anger
    grips my chest,
squeezing
    the compassion from my heart,
wringing
    the breath from my lungs,
i feel 
    only pain.

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I didn't realize how short 20 words was!

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  • GypsyEyes
    October 14, 2008

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    i really like the entire flow of the poem! it was smooth and to the point. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox


  • Canadamomma
    October 10, 2008
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    wow, this is a heartfelt write, anger brings sadness and hurt at times.
    good luck in the contest