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Where thoughts lay

Your face like a faded watermark
Settling itself in my head
flickers of old memories appearing
one by one.
As I lay myself down in bed

Dreams floating calmly one by one
My unborn child kicking at my tummy
The man I love laying asleep by my side
and that scary thought of becoming a
mummy

The clocks tick louder as I try to sleep
The thought of you drifting away
The walls turning into nothing
There I finally lay still waiting for day

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  • ckwriter69
    October 19, 2008

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    very touching and emotional write. Those quiet moments laying awake, with thoughts dispersed in our heads. Have a child stiring inside of you would bring all kinds of emotional thoughts. You'll be a great mom. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.


  • justgot2loveme
    October 12, 2008

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    Awww this is so full emotions.
    I can relate to what you wrote here.
    I am sure you'll make an wonderful mommy.
    don't be scared.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Justgot2loveme


  • jasminerose
    October 12, 2008

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    This is a beautifully expressed piece full of emtions that take the heart in hand.
    Lovely and touching.
    My best to you in this contest!
    Linda


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    I think all mom's to be are scared to first.
    I sure know I was.
    This is a very enjoyable read.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce