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Thank You, God

Thank You, God
For the wind in my hair
For the breeze in the trees
For the apples, grapes, and pears

Thank You, God
For the fish in the sea
For the mammals on land
For each bird in each tree

Thank You, God
For the ocean so blue
For the bark of a dog
For the cow and their moo

Thank You, God
For the clouds in the sky
For the grass that's so green
For the birds flying by

Thank You, God
For the stars in the night
For the sun in the day
For the moon, when in sight

Thank You, God
For the plants on the earth
For each animal there is
And for our very birth

Thank You, God
For each new day
For the entire universe
In every single way

Author notes

I think you get the point...I want to thank God!

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  • xXx Dark Poet xXx
    November 20, 2008
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    You thanked god in a beautiful. this was awsome


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    Humm..this is really an intersting piece while describing the nature and the creation with a sense of an inncency..I love the treatment of this poetry and yes its immages as well..well done..


  • Olivias Violin
    October 10, 2008
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    Very Nice