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Under the stars.

I could live off the love you make me feel,
No oxygen, No water,
Just you, I'll survive,
Just cause you're lying next to me.

I'll give you my heart,
I'll give you everything,
Just bare with me?
Bare with me?

This isn't easy for me either
But I'd take it all a million times over
Just to be with you,
To feel your breath on my neck,
As we lie together
Under the stars.
Forever.

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