looking into those deep brown eyes i fell
for what once was, and still is
feeling your arms around me
your touch is my poison
knowing i hurt you
builds in my mind everyday
wanting your soft touch back
i try to hide it
I want nothing more then to kiss you
to feel your body on mine
waiting for that day
i want your pain to end
i want to know everything will be okay
.... im lost
without you..
whats the word
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didnt we always say we wanted ppl to be able to feel see and read our love??? wow amazing mission accomplished
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Lovely work here
It touches the hearts of many well done keep up the good work
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Great poem! For some reason, after I read this,I started singing here without you by 3 doors down, no idea why though. Maybe because it really touches you, and makes you think. Strong. Good poet you are. Keep it up! =D
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beautiful
great poem, very touching! love the emotions! very nice flow as well! -
Wow, beautiful poem! I can feel all your emotions pouring out. I love the words you used to describe everything. This is much a feeling I know somewhat all to well, and I love reading work like this that makes me feel the emotions. Wonderful job!
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this is a very beautiful poem, and incredibly sad. you write with a lot of intensity. thank you for sharing : )
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