aching
for lips
of cotton,
silk
for farmer's hands
firmly sowing
her landscape
quakes
-whisper
hot hallelujahs
on my skin-
Author notes
prompt: 20 words about seduction
work in progress
Written October 10th, 2008
Comments
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Nice. I like the topic, very interesting for the prompt. I like the style too.
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This is so energetically sensual, earthy and raw and so completely integrated with its own casual strength that it is both delightful to read and sexy as hell. There is a self-possessed feeling of non-chalance that makes it become more than a giggle and an innuendo. Instead it is like its title, simple, often washed off little boys, but flourishes in the right hands.
Love,
Tom B.
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Now, this is how to plough the fields and scatter sensations across the body of the land.
Liked the hot hallelujahs on the skin, mercy me!
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Oh wow hrmmm
Thank you muchly for taking the time to enter this into my contest best wishes always be well
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