The fantastic reality
is that I love you so.
The downside of this
is that you don't know.
The indescribable ecstasy
is that you're it for me.
Though I could have millions
you're the only one I see.
Inside of our scoped plateau
lies the heart of this fool.
Laid out on a gilded platter
waiting for you to peruse.
There's nothing like this
and never again will there be.
This is your grand option
you'd be advised to make it me.
Parading before you may be
millions of other interests;
but as the ocean swells/rises
you may only launch from one crest.
Bid your future null and void
if me you do not opt to choose.
Your system's meltdown countdown
will then become prime-news.
I'm lingering near your thoughts
admiring your fine, flush tone.
And for your sake, I beg of you,
engulf yourself into my zone.
For I am 'home' for you, entirely
as there's no other place to find.
But suit yourself, as you will
you can have it, wrapped and signed.
In a list
A contest entry
- 5385 Points --- Winner Take All by mrme.
5385 points, ended October 28, 2008, 29 entries
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this is such a nice poem...very delightful with its sincere and light tone...the title is kinda intriguing and the content is so fantastic...God bless!!!
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Thanks - this review rocks
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Wonderful poem, a great write showing the love for someone and feeling shunned by them.
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Yes, or the love of a Father to His erring child
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I like this poem a lot. it's kind of whimsical with just a slight touch of naughtiness. Nicely done. very different from any other's i've read in this contest thus far. you use some great imagery here.
I also like the lines:
Your system's meltdown countdown
will then become prime-news.
definitely a great write.
thanks for entering and good luck.
PS _ what's a girl from Wisconsin doing using so much imagery of oceans and waves? lol -
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Hahaha I am a connoseir of water
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