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Determined Lover

The one that I have always loved.
Far from me by distance,
But right here with me in my heart.
It's too hard to forget you,
I don't think I ever will.
I believe that deep down in my heart
We will be together forever.
A city boy and a country girl,
Are we made for each other?
I believe so.
Distance is just a number,
But the distance between hearts can never be measured.
I will wait for you for as long as it takes.
Determined? Yes.
Crazy? Maybe.
Going to forget you? No way.
I love you forever.

Author notes

My lover lives in New York and I live in Louisiana. Of course there's distance but in my mind distance is just a number. The distance between hearts can never be measured. I just hope it stays like that.

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  • Yumi
    October 15, 2008
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    I know exactly what you mean. My love lives in New York as well. it's hard to be apart, but it also makes it that much better when you can see each other. you know?

    This is an amazing and beautiful piece. I can tell you put your love and your emotions into it. GREAT work, keep it up.

    ~Erica ^-^


  • HystericalHeart
    October 10, 2008
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    Wow... That reminds me alot of my freind right now. She lives in the country and she is dating a jerk faced city boy. She doesnt love him, or so she says. But... Im sure this is her thoughts as well.