Hold your head high gorgeous,
there are many who envy you
with your protruding hips
and your sky-blue eyes
They would love to hurt you
but, you need pay them no attention
you are absolutely perfect
they aren't even close
Baby, you make heads turn
and leave guys yearning for
your candy-coated kiss,
your one-night-stands
Girl, your beautiful
and thats just an understatement
your absolutely stunning
but I'm sure you already know that
Your diet is liquor and dick
and every girl wants to be you
They are jealous of what you've become
and they would kill to see you fall
Baby, just keep your head high
and don't let them see
what lies behind your crystal eyes
they don't know how much you hurt
They don't know the battle you face
every single day of your life
so, honey, keep your head high
because no matter what
-people would kill to see you fall-
Author notes
I hope this is ok for your contest. (?)
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A contest entry
- My first contest, please help !!! Allowing PW,s by justgot2loveme.
2200 points, ended October 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is more than ok.
I loved it. You have done a great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Justgot2loveme
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It is always such a shame when people feel this way about someone, you penned this with inspiration to lift the heart of this friend!
A wonderful entry for this contest!
My best to you!
Linda
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Many people love to see others fall,
and keeping your head up is not always easy.
But I say try anyway, and show them who the
better person is.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Hey... This is a dark one... Oddly enough I really like it..
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This is absolutly fabulous. Keep your head up, angel, because people will kill to see you fall. I love the last line; I'd suggest maybe just putting a space or two at the end of it. But this is great, best of luck in the contest!
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A good poem. Good luck with contest
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