Fun things like my guitar strings,
like ladies on the lawn;
painted ponies, their brass rings,
the queen falls to the pawn.
Checkers, chess, to make a mess,
to clean it up with pride;
all of these things I confess
I love deeply, deep inside.
Fun things, there's a lack of them
there's not much to go around,
lacy satin embroidered hem
on the woman I have found.
Ice cream sticks like building bricks
stacked up to the sky,
a belly full of laughter licks
the teardrops from my eye.
Take the gilded trophy home,
and keep what you have earned;
I'll take fun things, like a palindrome,
(for those who are well learned).
Author notes
You said to have fun...thanks!
A contest entry
- My first contest, please help !!! Allowing PW,s by justgot2loveme.
2200 points, ended October 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was such a joy to read.
It was a fun read and it is
so very cute.
Wishing you the best of luck
in the contest.
Justgot2loveme
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A very uplifting piece of poetry you have written here, such a delight to read!
My best to you in this contest!
Linda
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This was a very cute piece,
and fun it is.
Makes one feel happy inside.
I really liked it.
Good luck in the contest.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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You're right. this is a fun poem. I love the flow, and the happy 'vibe I get from it. Good luck with the contest.
Pam
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