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Stillness Of Mind

Macro to micro through the spiral

colors dance to sound.

Weaving fabric of creation

vibrations round and round.

 

Seven cosmic tones of color

lead the cosmic dance,

swirling within sacred ground

creates a soothing trance.

 

Specks of powerful reds

calm of tranquil blues,

melting, mixing; dancing,

engaging many hues.

 

Guiding gently to the center

by violets divine sight,

to womb of all creation

through darkness back to light.

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Pisces rainbow

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    Congrats


  • aboomer silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    I really like this.
    Wonderful words, images and flow in this. Much enjoyed it!
    thank you for your lovely entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • Swan song gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    Very strong beat t the rhyme
    Very good


  • Providence
    October 12, 2008

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    Fabulous! This is playful, light and airy but its deeper meaning keeps drawing the reader in with its rhythmic delight in the journey!

    Excellent!

    Marianne


  • FreeTara
    October 12, 2008

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    well this is a fabulouis written piece by a simple little toy that infact is not quite simple at all!!
    fabulous written full of imagination and colours!!

  • goalsv
    October 10, 2008
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    Great piece, such a perfect discription. Nice metephoric tone to the total work.


  • plainoljoe
    October 10, 2008

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    thanks for a visual trip down memory lane. This was my favorite childhood toy that still stimulates my mind today

    Joe


  • ourgirlFriday
    October 10, 2008

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    I feel Chakra coming on...

    Reminds me of a Chakra caftan I used to see in my fav catalog...at least the dancing and the swirling/spiraling. Lovely write! I'd have never thought to put that last stanza together with the poem - it really adds depth! Good job!

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