Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

you won't notice how i'm trying to waste away

and perfect and beautiful
and part ways
i don't care

makes the air i breathe more tense
and belong no where
it all works out in the end

past washing
i sleep
standing there

but mine
with my dagger in your heart
like yours

Author notes

it doesnt make much sense but it was fun

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Melodies
    October 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Ah, This poem speaks of romance in an insane way that is typical of love. You might have written it deliberately and it could be deemed fabulous.