TaaaKe My HannD. TaAkE My Hannnd!
You follow my every move,
The lights following me must be your car
I know I shouldn't be wanting this,
But your eyes are so BeAuTiFuL burning!
We're running out of night,
Light will be returning soon,
You KNow I hAtE LiiiGhT!
I'm not as apathetic as you think
Your face runs through my mind
Numerous times a day...
Hoping that you'd say
"TaaaKe My HannD. TaaKe My Hannnd, TaakE mY LiFeE!
Author notes
this poem was inspired by "The Used- Take It Away"
option 1
idk.. i kinda like it!
A contest entry
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Comments
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i like the way you use the same words to add meaning . i like how it is set out and how it flows. Dont know how it represents my contest though,
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ty for entering a great poem good luck
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stab stab stab let me make your pain be gone!
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I kinda like it too
That's a pretty awesome poem!!!
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Upon re-reading it again and again..........I can't stop!!!! I def. love this!!
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wow - have to say the bg caught my eyes!...lol
I'm not familiar with 'The Used' - but this was interesting - the images were good!
best wishes
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ha yeah, it kind of makes me feel like im being... put in a trance or something lol thanks!
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Oh yeah Sticky caps lol I love the extra letters in the no rules contest love it thank you muchly for taking the time to enter my contest best wishes be well.
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