You give me hope, my love
My path was in your light
My beautiful white dove
In between (my) soul and plight
Like a sunrise to my life
You bring a new hope each day
In the darkness of my strife
You help me to find my way
My love for you is a dream
That I never wish to wake from
A flower that will always gleam
As it lays basking in your sun
Author notes
I wrote this when I was very depressed having arrived home from Portugal, and leaving a wonderful girl behind... I'd never been smitten before, and she was so nice about it. anyway, yes please leave a comment, because this is my heart at its most vulnerable! (You can be critical though...) thanks, Tom.
A contest entry
- you... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 25, 2008, 6 entries
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the author has expressed quite well love in the midst.
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Thank you very much!
I am glad you like it!
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Yes..I agree with the descripon you showed here in the poetic journey..and made me feel easy with the focus of your poetry ..The simple journey here rveals the universal grace of HIS world..well done...
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