His essence
Radiates silently
Across her body
Awakening.....
Slowly stirring her
From shades of sleep
Kissing
Carressing
Warming
The depths of her being
Opening her eyes
She smiles
Nestling into his embrace
A contest entry
- Picture inspiration by crazymomma.
400 points, ended November 5, 2008, 40 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is beautiful.
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Excellent
Very well done A great creation for the contest. Congrats on the gold.
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A heartfull of lovely words...
creating a charming glowing picture of morning in all her glory...I shall hang it on my wall and waken to it every morning
Oh, if I lives could be always like that!
Love it
John
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Warm and inviting. I have a soft spot for poetry involving nature themes. I enjoyed the read.
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You did a wonderful job with this prompt. Your words flow so smoothly and the imagery is beautiful.
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Beautiful descriptive work my friend! This one is just a pleasure to read! Good job again!
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What a soft, sensual write... it flows beautifully and fills the imagination with loving images and wistful thoughts...
Ken
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Lovely. It is so peaceful. Wonderful imagery you created! You described this picture very well! Excellent work! I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Sydney
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with warmth
the warmth of the sun rays int he mornig can be felt in yr lines .. its very lovely
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"His essence
Radiates silently
Across her body"
great opening! love the imagery in this piece and u took it wekk from the prompt
i see u can do two different styles...you have been writing for a while yes?
awesome job with this write, know that u have made me a fan of your work
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Very Beautiful Jesann
A delightful poem to start my day with. Brought a smile. Your soft words capture the essence of love awakening. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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lovely sexy piece, great images, gentle feel.
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Excellent work here Jesaan! A good visual work of poetry that came from you. THANKS SO MUCH!!!
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Very sensual, nice view of the picture.
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Beautiful
I really do not know what else to say! I love poetry about Nature. A very good take on the prompt
Well done! Thank you for sharing
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Lovely
And nature always has it's ways of reminding us of her beauty. And the poet, in this fine piece, gets the message across as well.
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Nice write.. Thank you for commenting on my poem..
so far you are the only one that really understood on what I was talking or writing about... Thanks once again... Your friend in Poetry... JackReed3...
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Wow Jesaan what a way to start any day.....beautiful..Good luck...shouldn't need it though.....mal
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Thats the way to start a great day.. Well done..
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LOVELY EXPRESSION OF THE PROMPT... well done .... pete good luck
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JUST GORGEOUS!!!!
And nothing could ever compare to a morning like this!
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Beautiful words you've written
for this picture. All the best
to you in this contest and thanks
for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826
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