Cravings of fresh fusion elicits energy,
creating odours for fresh, enraptured enjoyment.
Coaxed out from funereal, empty efforts,
colours open full flavours ever expectantly.
Cappuccino of froth foams effortlessly,
evacuating cobwebs of former, frail empty essence.
Come on, feast from elation's earnestness,
content offered for fanatics eager emotions.
Author notes
Word - COFFEE
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A contest entry
- are you up for it? by willowprincess.
1200 points, ended November 9, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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good alliteration here, flowing very nicely along, ah coffee, it makes me physically sick! i never drink it, i do love tea (beer- do not think about beer lol) though.
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i love this. you did a great job of describing coffee (one of my dearest loves) while still maintaining the form. great job.
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i love all the pungent aromas,, of coffee.. mmm think i will have a latte now good luck 2 sugars please
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good job following the rules, i'll be back to comment on the poem later.
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Holy hekc, how did you do this, you did it to perfection no doubt there. Telented quill you have lady. Best to you in the contest
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You obviously love your coffee, It fits the prompt nicely. Not something I would write about but anyway...good luck in the contest.
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