In a plethora of vibrant energies,
Psychedelic visions of immortal obscurity,
Forever yours to grasp,
At the strings of cotton-made life,
Reaching out in live-wire intervals,
Firefly pin-pricks of little heaven drops,
Bringing forth the power of the higher souls,
Engaging in this child's play,
Breaking heart-shaped boxes,
Lest they break us first,
Author notes
Artist Credit:
l_b1121942db8fa7cbfc48482cd489cefc by whisper
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest 10 entries 10 lines more or less by mysticstorm.
300 points, ended October 11, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest for free verse poems... PW of Oct'08 is allowed by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended October 18, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I write to invoke feelings, which ones did I invoke within you?
Comments
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very nice poem.
To be honest.... this being a poem with ref to photo prompt in other contest... meaning becomes more clear only with photo.... I had to visit there.
Good luck,
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Sorry have added the photo to the poem now
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Very deep and strong in emotions...what and ending theis is...leaving one to wonder just which way life may turn later one...nicely done!
thank you for entering...
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Thanks so much for the gold x
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Wow.. How did you manage to get all that from the pic.
Breaking heart-shaped boxes,
Lest they break us first,
Very, very moving.
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Thanks Black glad you liked this I just looked at it and the words flowed
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