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Keg and vine


Leaning in, I smell the perfume of body spray and cunt,
the curve of her chin and soft fullness in her lips belie
her age. The firm upturn of her breasts gives way
to the sorrow that brings her here, as playful eyes
draw my tongue toward her need, more flame than thought,
her hand surrounds the firm desire that I know will give us peace.
and for a moment it does.







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  • Grunts Girl gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    you paint a picture of the physical sex and how at the end i felt the sadness of using it to cover for something else.

    thank you for this entry in our contest. I appreciate you taking the time.


  • Cat gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    i just don't get ugly love from this- at all..

    i like the title
    but beyond that this reads like
    all poetry erotica and doesn't really fit the contest directives

    i do appreciate your efforts though,
    thanks,
    Mary


    • NomDePlume silver member
      October 24, 2008
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      hmmmmm...

      Perhaps ugly as well as beauty is in the eye of the beholder~

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    Imagery and emotion imbued with the ugliness of being devoid of anything else except that momentry need, neat title btw.