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More Like Her.

He's running back into her arms.
Holding her baby and rocking it back and forth.
He didn't love me anymore
All because I acted to much like her.
That must not be true.
You're with her and ditching your own family.
What am I supposed to say
When our baby says,
"Mommy why does he love her baby more than me?"
How could you ruin our family?
I was nothing but fucking good to you.
But you love her
And she loves you with all she has.
I should hold on to my dignity
But I don't know how to at this point.
Forgiving you,
She's way stronger than I ever could be.
I guess I should of been more like her.

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It's true. He's left me. And when he's ready for a relationship he's going back to her. She has a baby. but he won't even claim the one he's made with me. I don't know what I'm going to say when my baby asks where is daddy and why is he with another family and why doesn't daddy love me. It breaks my heart.

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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Hmm...sad but true nowadays. There are so many emotions that are recognizable in this poem, and hopefully I am not the only one who sees them.

    One thing: "All because I acted to much like her."

    The correct form of the word "to" should be "too" in this particular case. (sorry, I've been an AP teacher before and am training to do it again, so its a habit to notice )

    And in the famous words of yours truly: "Pick up the pen and never put it down again!"

    ASM
    AKA Raymond

  • Bob Fox
    October 25, 2008

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    Life

    Life and it's realities. Bad relationships. Bad choices. But the beauty of being young is that one can learn and recover. The trick is to really learn. Love comes in many ways.

  • She Stole My Voice
    October 11, 2008

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    Tell your baby that its father is a complete asshole and I'm going to stab him in the jaw.

    :]
    Fucker.
    Well, he missed out on such an amazing and beautiful woman, and he didn't realize it before, then he's a real douche bag.


    I'm always here for you ♥


    -rainbow.