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When Lost

When you're lost,
and there is nothing else to do,
just stick by me,
cuz I'm right next to you.

You may be mad
At the awful things i said.
But now you're lost,
Let's not think about bed.

Its my fault i know
I should have been smart
but now you need me
I dont want us to part

I love you, baby
forever and ever
even if your lost
and cross and bitter

when you're lost,
im here with you
till we both die
Cuz i am lost like you.

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this is a really good poem, i would think. please tell me what you think.
Written January 26th, 2004

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  • Kutebrunette07
    January 26, 2004
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    Great

    OMg..its so good...I really like it I wish i coudl write like that but im sure i cant right now..hehe.Keep up the godo work..its GREAt