I know right now things are pretty confusing between us... but what you need to understand is that I don't know what we're doing either. We started something four years ago, that was so long ago. I think we can build onto it from here, make it into something amazing, if we both have the will for it. I don't know if this is love, what I do know is that I'm ecstatic when I'm talking to you. It's like I have this perma-grin, I just can't stop smiling. Everything you say to me just seems so right. And I L.O.V.E that feeling. But that doesn't say to me that this is love. I'm kind of scared of that word, because all the people that have been around me have said that they were in love, and then their lives fall apart, something happens. I don't want that to happen to us, so I don't want to jinx us. I MISS YOU SO MUCH. I don't know where you want this to go, I just know what you've told me, which confuses me a little. Like you say you miss me, but do you just miss me as a friend to hang out with? Or do you miss me as something more?
I know the poem you wrote asks if we could be dysfunctional together, and I think that it is a great possibility.
I miss you so much and can't wait to get home to you!
Author notes
Read the prompt that was given in the contest... ah never mind I know you won't, so I'll pass it along for you:
The prompt for this one is simple. What I want you to do is write a letter to someone that says everything you want to say to them, but you just don't know how to say it to their face.
The letter can either be in the form of a letter or the form of a poem, it doesn't really matter. This can be any genre of letter, any emotion flowing behind it, as long as you blow me away!
Okay so I might edit this before the contest is over, if so I'll put a [EDITED] in the title.
xxxbrittanyxxxx
A contest entry
- a letter to you by Xombii.
700 points, ended November 10, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love this, and the only editing I think it needs is your AP name in the authors notes.
Thank you for entering.
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yeah sorry about that!
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hmmm interesting, i shall have to contimplate this, and i got kicked off the computers at the center.
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i missed you by an hour today... =(
maybe i'll give you a call from 3-5... :/
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