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Desolate




through sand,
      my footprints
follow …  …  …  …  … me



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http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2423/571.jpg?1223615240

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    This entry as well as mine exresssed more truth than the winnners,. We always leave footprints...as we look for destiny in my poem entry. I think you should of gotten the gold....


  • crivanea silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    cute!!..i like it!..although..i think sometimes the sand is so deep..that the foot is sunk in..and then the footprints doesn't follow..but it drags u in..lol..nice 6 words


  • Confusedboy
    October 11, 2008
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    very nice for 6 words.


  • grannyeri gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    Wonderful few words for this picture prompt - liked the form used to get your message across - so few, such impact!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    six words
    always deeply profound
    we all have a bit of difficulty looses the footprints
    exquisite talent and a unique eye
    God bless you my friend...

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